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Hamishwillee - Subedited/Reviewed

Hi Shai

Thanks very much for this article, and for competing - much appreciated!

I have subedited this, primarily for English and readability. Please check I didn't break anything and that you are happy with this.

Two points

  1. The screen is called "Foods to avoid from". This should just be "Foods to avoid"
  2. What is acronym RDA above? This should be explained.


Thank you

Regards

Hamish

hamishwillee (talk) 06:45, 13 December 2013 (EET)

Hamishwillee - Would be great to tidy the code up.

Just a couple of thoughts. I like that this article addresses a "real" medical use case - you haven't just created this in order to meet the terms of the competition. I think the advice is appropriate for a design and user experience article and makes sense. I also like that you did research - too often it's easy to jump in unthinking.

Code isn't really required for this sort of article, so even though I miss it, it is not needed.

"Room for improvement" - it would be great if you'd taken the time to tidy up the code for this audience - because users will read it and learn from it. I know it was produced in a hackathon, but if you're re-using on a wiki, worth thinking about the audience.

Thanks again for this.

regards

Hamish

hamishwillee (talk) 07:15, 16 December 2013 (EET)

Shai.i -

I'll try and clean up the code a bit in the near future...

shai.i (talk) 02:48, 17 December 2013 (EET)

 
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