Talk:Building a health app for the developing world
Hamishwillee - Subedited/Reviewed
Thanks very much for this article, and for competing - much appreciated!
I have subedited this, primarily for English and readability. Please check I didn't break anything and that you are happy with this.
- The screen is called "Foods to avoid from". This should just be "Foods to avoid"
- What is acronym RDA above? This should be explained.
talk) 06:45, 13 December 2013 (EET)(
Hamishwillee - Would be great to tidy the code up.
Just a couple of thoughts. I like that this article addresses a "real" medical use case - you haven't just created this in order to meet the terms of the competition. I think the advice is appropriate for a design and user experience article and makes sense. I also like that you did research - too often it's easy to jump in unthinking.
Code isn't really required for this sort of article, so even though I miss it, it is not needed.
"Room for improvement" - it would be great if you'd taken the time to tidy up the code for this audience - because users will read it and learn from it. I know it was produced in a hackathon, but if you're re-using on a wiki, worth thinking about the audience.
Thanks again for this.
talk) 07:15, 16 December 2013 (EET)(
Shai.i -I'll try and clean up the code a bit in the near future...
talk) 02:48, 17 December 2013 (EET)(