Talk:Reporting memory usage on Windows Phone
Hamishwillee - Review/subedit/renamed
I've reviewed/subedited and renamed your article. The main change is to add better links to existing articles on the wiki.
As a stand alone article this quite nice - well written and clear. However we already have Techniques for memory analysis of Windows Phone apps which appears to cover all this material and more. Can you explain what value your article adds over this - we try avoid duplication on the wiki.
As a competition entry this doesn't (as far as I can tell) use any new WP8 features. You're more than welcome to enter it, but this means it is not really the sort of article we were hoping for.
All that said, I like your writing. I hope you contribute more (and original) topics to the wiki in future.
06:17, 12 December 2012 (EET)